12月7日雅思大作文真题参阅范文老年人住退休社区是好是坏

原标题：12月7日雅思大作文真题参阅范文 | 晚年人住退休社区是好是坏？

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专栏作者：唐伟胜

新航道特约雅思学术参谋

广东外语外贸大学教授、博士

我国闻名英语教育专家

《9分达人雅思写作真题复原及解析3》作者

2019年12月07日

雅思大作文标题

晚年人住退休社区是好是坏？

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Nowadays some older people choose to live in retirement communities with other older people, rather than living with their adult children. Is it a positive or negative development?

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解析&审题

本周考试的论题或许与许多考生平常了解的论题有些收支，触及到晚年人退休去哪住这一社会问题。

有些人觉得晚年人应该去晚年社区，与其他晚年人日子在一同，而不是与孩子住一同。这个主意其实正在变得很盛行，由于咱们已看到渐渐的变多的晚年人公寓或养老院。

毫无疑问，晚年人住在养老院（或所谓的退休社区）有许多优势，比方与其他晚年人有更多一同的交流论题，养老院供给的专业服务也或许更好等。因而，咱们咱们能够用“一边倒”的方法来回应这个标题。

可是，退休社区也存在一些问题，比方价格贵重，再如有些晚年人无法习惯脱离孩子，脱离家的日子。假如考虑到这样一些问题，咱们就可用“双方评论”的方法。至于晚年人是否应该住退休社区这样的一个问题，答案当然就不能混为一谈，而取决于个人挑选。

教师笔记

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People are wondering about where they want to live during their last stage of life. Today’s increasing retirement homes can be a good thing for some people but bad for others.

人们在考虑在生命的最终阶段他们想住在哪里。现在渐渐的变多的养老院对一些人来说是功德，但对其他人来说却是坏事。

解析

（1） 引出论题，并提出自己的观念：白叟社区对有些人来说是好的，但对其他人来说则欠好，清晰了本文的“双方评论”结构。

（2） The last stage of life生命的最终阶段

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Living in a retirement community can be an attractive idea for some old people, especially those who want to live among people of similar age. Many old people find it out of the questionto live with their children because the generation gapis so big that they sometimes simply cannot communicate with each other. In the retirement home, however, the old people often find they have a better time living with those with similar interests. Besides, a retirement home provides a variety of benefits that may appeal tothe old people, such as the around-the-clock supervision, on-site medical care, and individualized help with daily needs. These benefits can make a differencein the lives of elderly people.

日子在退休社区对一些晚年人来说是一个很有招引力的主意，特别是那些想和年纪类似的人一同日子的人。许多晚年人发现和孩子住在一同是不或许的，由于代沟太大，有时底子无法彼此交流。但是，在养老院里，晚年人往往发现他们与志趣相投的人日子得更好。此外，养老院还供给各种或许招引晚年人的福利，如24小时监督、现场医疗和个性化的日常需求协助。这些福利能够本质性地改动晚年人的日子。

解析

（1） 本段证明退休社区的优点，这个优点是经过比较“住在家里”来证明的。

（2） People of similar age 年纪类似的人

（3） Out of the question 不或许的（=impossible）

（4） Generation gap 代沟

（5） Appeal to 招引 （=attract）

（6） Make a difference 发生差异，发生很大影响

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However, sending an elderly parent to a retirement community also poses several potential problems. In the first place, it is difficult for many families to afforda retirement home’s services which are typically very costly. It is, therefore, a great financial burden for families to have their old parents living in a retirement community. In addition, some elderly people, even without financial problem, have trouble living in a retirement home. Some of them may be so independent that they are simply not ready to accept help from others. For others, leaving their home and family territory may be very difficult because that involves adjusting toan entirely new environment and lifestyle.

但是，把垂暮的爸爸妈妈送到退休社区也会带来一些潜在的问题。首要，关于许多家庭来说，很难负担起养老院一般十分贵重的服务。因而，让老爸爸妈妈住在退休社区对家庭来说是一个巨大的经济负担。此外，一些晚年人即便没有经济问题，也难以在养老院日子。他们中的一些人或许十分独立，底子不愿意承受他人的协助。对其他人来说，脱离他们的家庭领地或许十分困难，由于这触及到习惯一个全新的环境和日子方法。

解析

（1） 本段评论住在退休社区或许带来的问题：价格贵重；有些晚年人不习惯白叟院的日子。

（2） Potential 潜在的

（3） Afford 承当；负担得起

（4） Costly 贵重的

（5） Territory 领地

（6） Involve 触及；包括

（7） Adjust to... （努力地）习惯......

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In conclusion, there are pros and consregarding the idea of retirement communities. It is hard to say whether the idea is positive or negative because the answer varies from person to person.

综上所述，退休社区这个概念是有利害的。很难说这个概念是活跃的仍是消沉的，由于答案因人而异。

解析

（1） 本段得出结论，即退休社区各有利害，无法清晰它到底是好仍是坏。

（2） Pro and cons 利和弊

（3） Vary from person to person 因人而异

向上滑动阅读

7分范文

People are wondering about where they want to live during their last stage of life. Today’s increasing retirement homes can be a good thing for some people but bad for others.

Living in a retirement community can be an attractive idea for some old people, especially those who want to live among people of similar age. Many old people find it out of the question to live with their children because the generation gap is so big that they sometimes simply cannot communicate with each other. In the retirement home, however, the old people often find they have a better time living with those with similar interests. Besides, a retirement home provides a variety of benefits that may appeal to the old people, such as the around-the-clock supervision, on-site medical care, and individualized help with daily needs. These benefits can make a difference in the lives of elderly people.

However, sending an elderly parent to a retirement community also poses several potential problems. In the first place, it is difficult for many families to afford a retirement home’s services which are typically very costly. It is, therefore, a great financial burden for families to have their old parents living in a retirement community. In addition, some elderly people, even without financial problem, have trouble living in a retirement home. Some of them may be so independent that they are simply not ready to accept help from others. For others, leaving their home and family territory may be very difficult because that involves adjusting to an entirely new environment and lifestyle.

In conclusion, there are pros and cons regarding the idea of retirement communities. It is hard to say whether the idea is positive or negative because the answer varies from person to person.

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主张背诵的语句

1. Living in a retirement community can be an attractive idea for some old people, especially those who want to live among people of similar age.

日子在退休社区对一些晚年人来说是一个很有招引力的主意，特别是那些想和年纪类似的人一同日子的人。

2. Many old people find it out of the question to live with their children because the generation gap is so big that they sometimes simply cannot communicate with each other.

许多晚年人发现和孩子住在一同是不或许的，由于代沟太大，有时底子无法彼此交流。

3. Besides, a retirement home provides a variety of benefits that may appeal to the old people, such as the around-the-clock supervision, on-site medical care, and individualized help with daily needs.

此外，养老院还供给各种或许招引晚年人的福利，如24小时监督、现场医疗和个性化的日常需求协助。

4. For others, leaving their home and family territory may be very difficult because that involves adjusting to an entirely new environment and lifestyle.

对其他人来说，脱离他们的家庭领地或许十分困难，由于这触及到习惯一个全新的环境和日子方法。

5. It is hard to say whether the idea is positive or negative because the answer varies from person to person.

很难说这个概念是活跃的仍是消沉的，由于答案因人而异。

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